I thought this assignment was extremely difficult. I did not gain that much feedback from the last two elevator pitch comment posts. The only helpful comment I did receive was that I was not supposed to change my elevator pitch just the way in which I performed it on the video. It was hard trying to be creative so I just stood in front of my computer again.
I felt the same way about this assignment. I did not get enough feedback to actually change my pitch. The only thing I would say you could change is maybe do your pitch in a different place, or have a friend record it for you. I know how difficult it was to be creative for this assignment, and I still think you did a great job!
here is the link to my blog: http://poecr.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Alyssa, I really love this business idea! I have small boobs so putting more focus on them would be lovely, but I always have a hard time finding clothes that do that. Being able to just choose a selection that already has filtered items for me sounds perfect and much easier for us consumers! I think the only way you could improve this "elevator pitch" is maybe to dress up really fancy like your app is advertising for or like the previous commenter mentioned and just have a friend help record the video for you. If you have a chance, check out my elevator pitch here: http://plantflourishgrow.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3the-cat-connection.html
Hey there Alyssa, Great job on this elevator pitch. Based on other commenters, there seems to be a viable market for this idea. Also, perhaps the lack of feedback is a sign that people do not perceive a need for much improvement. I too got very little constructive criticism which can make altering an elevator pitch quite difficult. If you’re interested, here’s a link to my elevator pitch: http://madiganent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html#comments
Alyssa,
ReplyDeleteI felt the same way about this assignment. I did not get enough feedback to actually change my pitch. The only thing I would say you could change is maybe do your pitch in a different place, or have a friend record it for you. I know how difficult it was to be creative for this assignment, and I still think you did a great job!
here is the link to my blog:
http://poecr.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Alyssa,
ReplyDeleteI really love this business idea! I have small boobs so putting more focus on them would be lovely, but I always have a hard time finding clothes that do that. Being able to just choose a selection that already has filtered items for me sounds perfect and much easier for us consumers! I think the only way you could improve this "elevator pitch" is maybe to dress up really fancy like your app is advertising for or like the previous commenter mentioned and just have a friend help record the video for you.
If you have a chance, check out my elevator pitch here: http://plantflourishgrow.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3the-cat-connection.html
Hey there Alyssa,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this elevator pitch. Based on other commenters, there seems to be a viable market for this idea. Also, perhaps the lack of feedback is a sign that people do not perceive a need for much improvement. I too got very little constructive criticism which can make altering an elevator pitch quite difficult.
If you’re interested, here’s a link to my elevator pitch: http://madiganent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html#comments